Explaining the Story - Beating Heart

Explaining the Story – Beating Heart

I developed this for a Holloween story. I remember the Edgar Alan Poe’s story called ‘Tell-Tale, Heart’, where a man was buried alive.

I wanted the reader to feel that the man was feeling the ‘end’ and wondered what was going on. Was he dying?

Instead of dying, he was masturbating and finally cumming.

Holloween was Oct 31. It is about ghost, goblins, and things that go bump in the night. I wanted to write something in the theme of Holloween. It is called ‘Beating Heart’. As you read it, ask yourself, is he dying? Or What? Enjoy.

Love, Jay

Beating Heart
Thump thump…
Thump thump…
I can hear my heart beating
It is racing
Thunp thump…
Thump thump…
I hear the sound of my breathing as I inhaled
Thump thump…
Thump thump…
And quickly exhale
Thump thump…
Thump thump…
I know the end is near.
I feel it deep inside of me.
Thump thump…
It is stiring and it won’t be long.
Thump thump…
I see visions of the past.
Images that please my senses
Thump thump…
I feel my body freeze. Motionless.
Thump thump…
All my muscle tightens and tenses up
Beads of sweat appear on my body.
Thump thump…
For what seems like an eternity, I lay there frozen in time.
Thump thump…
I can not do anything but lay there
Waiting for the release
Thump thump…
Then I feel the explosion
My body quivers
Thump thump…
I feel the rush of fluids
Thump thump…
Warm liquids fall on my chest
My body starts to shake.
Thump thump…
Ecstasy surrounds me
As warm liquids continue to splatter on my chest.
Thump thump…
Then peace falls upon me
It engulfs my senses
Thump Thump…
My body relaxes
The end has arrived
Thump thump…
I feel the release that erupted from my body.
It encloses every fiber of my body
Thump Thump…
Contentment fills my mind.
Relief fills my body…
Thump Thump…
It is all over
Thump Thump…
I jerk one more time
It is done
Thump Thump…
I release my grip on my cock.
I feel the last drops of semen seep out of my cock
thump thump…
I am at peace.
I listen to my heart as I drop off to sleep
Thump thump…
Thump…
Thump…